One thing we want to avoid in our writing is unemotional and dull writing. A story that feels “flat” won’t keep a reader interested for very long, and characters that don’t exhibit honest emotion in the midst of their turmoil will come across more like robots than people. Writing for emotion needs two elements. The first is there needs to be a cause, some sort of event or stimulus that calls for an emotional reaction. The second is a strong character with an honest and believable emotional response. The response has to be well timed, too. A scene that has a subtle stimulus may slip past the reader and the emotional response may be confusing. It’s also important to avoid being cliché or melodramatic in order to seem honest to the reader. After all, honesty in our storytelling is the most vital way we connect with our readers.
If you still have reservations about opening up so much of your emotional and personal side when it comes to your work, perhaps this would be a good time to reflect on the infamous words of Ernest Hemmingway when he said, “There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.”
We have so many great writers in our guild. Feel free to share advice on this topic in the comments below.